Quest-Haiku

Quest-Haiku

A Poem by sayandeep kundu
"

In a quest of my "self".

"
Promenading pain
scornfully asks,"Who are you?"
in a quest in vain.

© 2010 sayandeep kundu


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Nice. Very well written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I sense an inner struggle and identity lost.
Thought provoking, but what's with the rhyme? Haiku are not supposed to rhyme :S

Posted 13 Years Ago


nicely written and the theme and message are powerfully clear

Posted 13 Years Ago


not always a quest in vain... but a nice thought represented excellently... liked it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I liked this one a lot! I love Haiku's and thought this one was very creative and different from the ones I'm used to. Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm not really a haiku fan but this one impressed me. It's like you have lost your identity and you want it back

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this one a lot. I am a haiku fan, but this seeme like it could even be more. I would love to see a dialogue between a personified "pain" talking to a "pleasure".
Still very good though, liked it a lot!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Understood. Very powerful haiku. Nicely penned.
Light,
SiddARTha


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 10, 2010
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sayandeep kundu
sayandeep kundu

Kolkata, West Bengal, India



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I'm a student..more specifically an engineering student..but beyond something akin to a social compulsion owing to which i had to resort to engineering machinery in stead of engineering my own mind i'.. more..

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