Stupid me

Stupid me,
I thought you cared,
all those nights you bared
through the pain of talking to me.

I was a fool,
to think that you'd
ever loved me.

how could I not see
that you wanted to be
with her and not me.


I thought we would be together forever
but you left no clue behind as to why you left whatsoever.

Author's Note

Thoughts?

Reviews

[BeanHead:)]

theres a good rhyme and ring to it. pretty catchy. your ending line put the finishing touch for me and you could feel emotion. you could have put a stanza in there describing the emotion and feelings you felt which would've made it so much better. also personally i dont really like the idea of placing abbreviated words in poems. good job!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I like this poem. It's sad, but you can still feel the pain you were feeling. I felt like this before. I liked everything about it. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Cassiopia Summers]

Good rhyme in the last two lines, very clever. (: Wonderful job dear.

[Alex Thomas]

Excellent portrayal of feelings and emotions. Good rhythm good rhyme. I cannot ask for much more from a poem.

[KaySea]

i think this is a very good poem

[Ashley Ree]

I added this to my library. Just because well. I've been there. I've been hurt like this. Thank You so much for this.

[R E Tree]

I felt like I was totally absorbed into your head just then. I can relate to this I once had thoughts like this over a boy who pretended to care. And left me without even saying why or what. It is completely heart-braking to lose a friend. It just makes them so not worth it

[deeps]

Wonderful rhyme scheme and emotional.
Very well written as well.

[cherry]

OH!Great! This poem shows the feeling of mine!

[Ruth]

A moving poem that shows the fragility of the heart!
Answers sometimes prefer the shadows and moving forward is the only way, hard to do though!
Excellent poem
xx