Young love

Being young, 

At the time, I thought I was in love,

For he was an angel that fell from above

Author's Note

Thoughts?

Reviews

[Kelly Taylor]

Even though it's brief it's still got a lot of emotion in it. Yeah, young love never ends up too great. Been there, done that. It's very relatable.

[Bridget Mcmaken]

Strong and great! I just love it.

[Rachel 6sixtrümper]

Now that i understand the context of the first line, it is amazing :) haha

[Gianna Perry]

Gorgeous, very true, very strong. Excellent job.

[Rachel 6sixtrümper]

Very good, but i feel as though the last two lines are awkward because the first line doesnt have a rhyme.... the two lines by themselves are amazing, but its hard to place the first..

[Alex Thomas]

If ignorance is bliss then I wish I was blissfully ignorant... It doesn't flow much like a poem, but I do rather enjoy the statement. I can't wait to read your next.

[deeps]

I like this one, It's moving to me & inspirational.
Very well done in such a few short words.