Girls

Girls

Laughing

Making fun

Window shopping

Young

Author's Note

I finally got it right! The perfect Lanterne. Thoughts? =]

Reviews

[al25]

Flowed really well

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Good lantern poem. It was very nicely written. Thanks for sharing.

[Cynthia]

Wow!
Nice poem!
You actually got all the things right,
what young ones do and feel...

[KaySea]

incredible

[Coyote Poetry]

Young and a lot of time to shop. My daughters would be very content. A very good poem. You told a complete story. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Andrew Wright]

Awesome... You rocked it... but then again, you always do ^.^

[Cheyenne]

I really like it it describes teenage girls and older women very well its what we love to do no matter what!

[1416]

I like this. I know several poets who actually avoid the lantern because it can be frustrating to create, but you did a good job. I'm with Shayna Reed on the stereotype of girls, but well done nonetheless :)

[Alex Thomas]

There is no rights and wrongs in poetry even in specialized poetry. I like it a lot. It shows the carelessness of innocence.

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

lol still good, i like it very short and sweet high 5