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A Poem by SimplyDisastrous
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four years of bonding right down the f*****g drain.

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I can remember it as clear as day
You were here and I was bursting with joy
Happy to see you
Embracing you warmly
Then, in a flash, you're out of my grasp
and you're gone just like that
four years of bonding right down the f*****g drain
All because of you
Because of YOU, you dumbfuck,
you piece of s**t!
I hate you for making me feel like crap
I hate you for making me like this
Next thing I know I'm back in my room
And I'm crying
And I'm so f*****g pissed, so f*****g angry I could scream
And I'm breaking down, contemplating ways to get my 
mind off the pain I feel inside and project it to an outer 
feeling of agony. 
And my teeth sink into my flesh, my arm numbing
And I can't help but think:
Yes
Because it hurts like i had wanted it to
but then

I can't help but feel like it's not enough. 

© 2011 SimplyDisastrous


Author's Note

SimplyDisastrous
There are no such things as friends anymore. Fuck people.

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Strong and harsh words in this poem. I could feel the anger and disappointment in every line. Better to write down negative emotions. Acting out negative and saying things can create a blockage forever. I learn the hard way. Better to walk away and try to find a better road and place to be. A powerful poem with a lot of emotion and disappointment. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The emotion and raw energy from this poem is just mindblowing, It feels like I can see through your eyes and feel every tinge of pain and heartbreak at the loss of someone I cared about.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The transparency of the soul speaks volumes... great work!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think this poem is refereshing. I really your true angry emotions. Too many people care about what other people think its just nice to cus it out.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm sorry Honey... Talk? Messge me if you'd like. It's a good poem. I can feel the anger eminating between each word.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Strong and harsh words in this poem. I could feel the anger and disappointment in every line. Better to write down negative emotions. Acting out negative and saying things can create a blockage forever. I learn the hard way. Better to walk away and try to find a better road and place to be. A powerful poem with a lot of emotion and disappointment. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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SimplyDisastrous
SimplyDisastrous

Hartford, CT



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Hey. I used to be on here alot when I was 15. Now, not so much. I'm 18 now and I'm not nearly as depressing as I used to be, but still depressing enough. Message me and feel free to read my old poems... more..

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