Valentine's Day

Valentine's Day

A Poem by Mason Vail

our love has spanned years...

one date on a calendar?

how inadequate!

© 2009 Mason Vail


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This is so true I've never liked v-day at all since the second grade.....
I only loved the candy. You should put this on v-day cards I'll
take about a hundred.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

congrats on your winning Haiku. Great job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Congratulations for winning Haiku-Week-16 Contest!

Sal

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very deep and moving! Nice little story!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A well crafted Haiku to be sure WeLL DonE!~Fran Marie

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great Haiku! Well done!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOL! cute, but I think you missed a few days, Birthday, anniversary, First Date, First Kiss, and on and on and on :-)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a perfect poem for a perfect love.
For those stuck in the mud need to really end if nothing happens soon
this wouldn't be understood.
One day...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PERFECT!!!!! EXACTLY!!!!!!!!!!! That may be the most simple, romantic thing I've ever read about Valentine's Day ever!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

*grins* brilliant. that's all there is to say. just brilliant.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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