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A Poem by ScaryTrees

in these heavy shoes
it requires little effort
to go down the hill
all the way to the bottom

in these heavy shoes
i think that you'll find
it's the getting back up
that causes the problems

© 2012 ScaryTrees


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This is an excellent poem. I appreciate how you used the same objects "heavy shoes" to show different perspectives. Beauty in brevity, as they say.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's the truth..xo

Posted 7 Years Ago


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ScaryTrees
ScaryTrees

campbell, CA



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A Poem by ScaryTrees