A Winter Without You

A Winter Without You

A Poem by w
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Haiku

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A gray day closes
as white falls on the dead grass
the stone reads "forgiven"

© 2012 w


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this feels like a very cold winter
=]

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short but powerful! Tells a lot, thanks for sharing..Keep it up buddy :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not to sound utterly stupid, but I didn't quite get the punchline...
Your poem is so beautiful, I would love it if you would tell me what the last line means

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

w

8 Years Ago

That in the end everything is forgiven and nothing bad matters anymore.
Blue Ivory

8 Years Ago

Oh. Wow that's a really nice way to imply it!
Ciao,

This is sad but great. The only thing that I noticed is that you said it's haiku but the last line has six syllables. Other than that this was really good.

Arrivederci!

Posted 8 Years Ago


short but deep, well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aw, even being a haiku, the meaning of this, despite the length, dug pretty deep. I like haikus and think I should start writing them more. My father tells me that writing poems is a great exercise for writing novels and short stories, because they force you to express a lot of meaning with few words.

Posted 8 Years Ago


w

8 Years Ago

I can't seem to write more than a few sentences anymore, so I think I will stick to poetry. :) Thank.. read more
C.A. Lucas

8 Years Ago

My pleasure.

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