Valentines Love

Acrostic

Veering away from you
Always saying I’m strong
Leaving me black and blue
Even in bed, I seem to not belong
Nothing I do pleases you
Tell me that I am wrong
I love you, I really do, but you
Never sing me a single song
Everything’s always about you
See this isn’t going to last very long

Losing faith in everything, I’m no longer strong
On my sword, I fall, committing Seppuku
Validating that I was always just strung along
Ending my suffering from this life with you

Reviews

[cmwelsh]

Many strong emotions, and well thought out. I like it!

[SouthernBelle]

I really like this I can feel emotion behind it! good job