Valentines Love

Valentines Love

A Poem by w
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Veering away from you
Always saying I’m strong
Leaving me black and blue
Even in bed, I seem to not belong
Nothing I do pleases you
Tell me that I am wrong
I love you, I really do, but you
Never sing me a single song
Everything’s always about you
See this isn’t going to last very long

Losing faith in everything, I’m no longer strong
On my sword, I fall, committing Seppuku
Validating that I was always just strung along
Ending my suffering from this life with you

© 2013 w


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Many strong emotions, and well thought out. I like it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this I can feel emotion behind it! good job

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Cincinnati, OH



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I climb inside my mind through the windows to the soul that I sold for a kiss in the fourth grade. I write about the adventures I have in my schizophrenic mind and the scars that my past has left. .. more..

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