Everything I Wanted; Nothing Anymore

one of my many dark desires....

In those moments of clarity

of absolute truth

the world seems so distanced

I'm suddenly so far away

drifting calmly in the wake

of all the chaos and confusion

finally realizing my place

is where there are no questions

only answers...

and hope

for tomorrow

still flowing in my veins

rushing me into euphoria

and completely drowning out

all the negative space

replacing it

with perfect happiness

any crystal clear understanding

soothing me in my manic state

taking my mind away from life

far away from humanity's existence

free of all the obscenities

which had me troubled before

but not anymore

not inside my peaceful escape

my version of running away

while still standing still...

my enlightened reality brings me closer

to everything I've ever wanted

but even closer to the nothingness

I wanted to fill

Reviews

[Robert Erickson]

i'd like to be there with you doll, this is really nice!!! but again i long to see you use white space and a tiny bit more order , i think using stanzas turns me on for some reason.... lol its really descriptive and a great rant =) i feel the same way 9999999% of the time so its wicked cool for shizzle

talk to u later bra

[Orlando Murcia]

I thought this was well
thought out

You write in a different style
but I still enjoyed

Very nice job!

Orlando M

[deeps]

I really like this, I can feel the emotion driponto your page, I like this alot