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A Poem by Michelle N. H.

We lay on sand by an ocean wide

Captivated by a crimson sunset

Listening to each-other's silence

Listening to each-other's thoughts

We make known our dreams

Through soft voices and smiles that are shy

And in those most cherished

We discover serenity

An internal continuous melody

That cautiously ties us as one

By means of invisible thread

While the stars of night bestow affection

Through a lustrous approbation

With eye contact

We fall in love

© 2018 Michelle N. H.


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Michelle N. H.

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This one was noticed by me, just hand't the time yet to review the right review, it deserves, and I think now is the time.... it has so much in it Mich, it has so much words almost can't discribe. So beautiful, so touching. It's just the perfect poem to describe pure being... and within that being there is everyting to discover to see, to feel.... once our eyes for example are closed on a hot spring or summer day, when we lay in the grass barefeet, and feel the sky smiling above us, the sun shining softly on our skin, the Vitamine D, transforms into brain thoughts, of euphoria, this was kind of such a feeling to me dear one..... (described in my own ways, but) that's the bliss, that is purity, and almost not touchable.... you know all of that don't you? :) I'm smiling. Invisible beauty, and thus yes, "ONE" connected, and "ONE" to be.... lovely work truly.

- Elisa

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

6 Years Ago

Yes, I know what you mean :) When the weather is temperate, it's how I favor to take a quiet moment .. read more

6 Years Ago

You're always so very welcome :) this was a beautiful piece.



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This is one touching poem to read. I enjoy the way the music produces a serene effect to your words. Beautifully done darlin.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

6 Years Ago

Thank you, darlin'! I'm so glad you find it touching. :)
Palewriter

6 Years Ago

Indeed I did wildflower.
This one was noticed by me, just hand't the time yet to review the right review, it deserves, and I think now is the time.... it has so much in it Mich, it has so much words almost can't discribe. So beautiful, so touching. It's just the perfect poem to describe pure being... and within that being there is everyting to discover to see, to feel.... once our eyes for example are closed on a hot spring or summer day, when we lay in the grass barefeet, and feel the sky smiling above us, the sun shining softly on our skin, the Vitamine D, transforms into brain thoughts, of euphoria, this was kind of such a feeling to me dear one..... (described in my own ways, but) that's the bliss, that is purity, and almost not touchable.... you know all of that don't you? :) I'm smiling. Invisible beauty, and thus yes, "ONE" connected, and "ONE" to be.... lovely work truly.

- Elisa

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

6 Years Ago

Yes, I know what you mean :) When the weather is temperate, it's how I favor to take a quiet moment .. read more

6 Years Ago

You're always so very welcome :) this was a beautiful piece.
beautiful imagery and rhythm, captures the innocence of first love in a most touching way

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

6 Years Ago

I'm so pleased! Thank you kindly.
this is beautiful,this is truly and honestly so beautiful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

6 Years Ago

Aww, I'm glad. Thank you :]
An internal continuous melody

That cautiously ties us as one

By means of invisible thread

Very pretty Michelle....and the music is pleasant also.
Well done.

Scott :) x

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Scott :) I'm actually happy with those lines as well, if that's okay to say of your own w.. read more
Scott Metro

6 Years Ago

You can be happy...the universe allow it.
My pleasure little ember.
Scott :) x
Stunning! I loved this very much. "By means of invisible thread". What a delicious line right there. Love is exactly like that...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

6 Years Ago

Thank you ever so much :)
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i love this end we fall at love. it s realy beautifuly describe this feeling. what everybody expirience. thanks for writing

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading :)
Just beautiful. I don't know if it was your intention or not, but the music does force the reader to read to the tempo causing them to slow down through every line which is a great idea. The image of the two on the sand is clear and the character of the music fits the poem perfectly. Awesome poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

6 Years Ago

Thank you :) I prefer reading poetry in a slow pace myself, that's why I tend to find music which fi.. read more
I love seeing angels, especially when angels go fall in love and feel safe around into someone's arms. This poem's again about love and love's what! How a love comes into a life and so on just you well expressed into the words throughout the whole piece of peace of writing.

May you live your life happily with your true-love for life! And I hope he knows that how lucky he's to be dating you and of course to live his life with you for life.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

6 Years Ago

Haha, I'm not in a relationship though. This poem's merely a wish, but thank you for the lovely thou.. read more
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This is a wonderful write on genesis of love.
Superb and beautiful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

6 Years Ago

:) Thank you, Zainul.
zainul

6 Years Ago

You are most welcome,Michelle.:)

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Added on December 15, 2013
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Tags: wish, contact, love, one, affection, sunset, ocean, beach, stars, serenity, silence

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I'm Michelle. To strangers I may seem reluctant, but I'm really quite open towards those that are patient and genuinely interested in getting to know me. I think a lot. I'm hardly ever bored. I've.. more..

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