One

We lay on sand by an ocean wide

Captivated by a crimson sunset

Listening to each-other's silence

Listening to each-other's thoughts

We make known our dreams

Through soft voices and smiles that are shy

And in those most cherished

We discover serenity

An internal continuous melody

That cautiously ties us as one

By means of invisible thread

While the stars of night bestow affection

Through a lustrous approbation

With eye contact

We fall in love

Author's Note

Reviews

[Michelle N. H.]

This one was noticed by me, just hand't the time yet to review the right review, it deserves, and I think now is the time.... it has so much in it Mich, it has so much words almost can't discribe. So beautiful, so touching. It's just the perfect poem to describe pure being... and within that being there is everyting to discover to see, to feel.... once our eyes for example are closed on a hot spring or summer day, when we lay in the grass barefeet, and feel the sky smiling above us, the sun shining softly on our skin, the Vitamine D, transforms into brain thoughts, of euphoria, this was kind of such a feeling to me dear one..... (described in my own ways, but) that's the bliss, that is purity, and almost not touchable.... you know all of that don't you? :) I'm smiling. Invisible beauty, and thus yes, "ONE" connected, and "ONE" to be.... lovely work truly.

- Elisa

[Michelle N. H.]

Yes, I know what you mean :) When the weather is temperate, it's how I favor to take a quiet moment and connect with the all, by lying on Earth, feeling the grass and the soil, the breeze and the sun on bare skin. It's the greatest feeling, and for my words to summon that sensation within you makes me so thrilled, I can't say.. Thank you so much, Elisa! I'm really very honored.

You're always so very welcome :) this was a beautiful piece.

[V. P. Trujillo]

The most lovely of things, seem to go unappreciated, unnoticed.

I think that's because too much recognition sours.

[Michelle N. H.]

It's as if the closer you come to beauty, the more difficult it is to perceive or appreciate.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

beautiful....that comfortable silence....when we can communicate even in silence.


jacob

[Michelle N. H.]

It is a lovely thing. Thank you, Jacob.