Observer of the moon

 in the night i watch him

as he wanders across

the dark space above

the twinkling of stars

keep my eyes wide awake

as nature moves in

his breath of cool

making sweet music

for my soul to listen to

and taste before

the morning sun

dawns anew

 by his loving hands

in her locks of shine

that may cross a

thousand terrains

i am yet to stroll

Author's Note

Reviews

[KeeD]

This is how I choose to write my poems, I adore when space and human emotion are connected. I loved this because I felt my heart out there, lost in the interstellar, dreaming about a cosmic romance. I wish to find my moon in a human, till then I'll always have the night to look forward to.

[Nicholas Shea]

Your words have such an interesting style! I enjoy the pairing with the music as well! You appeal to the senses!

[Michelle N. H.]

Thank you, Nicholas.

[NeiL ArandA]

I find this odd but perhaps artistic and perhaps intentional on the part of the author or writer. From merely looking it seems the piece needs some editing. There's no capital letter, periods, nor punctuation. But don't be fooled ...just simply looked beyond the obvious ...the introspection ...the vocabulary...the rhythmic flows of words, how short the sentence yet condense with meaning. How the thoughts and themes, feelings and emotions of such longing are perfectly interwoven in such a short stunning lines. Here perhaps the author is thinking outside the box. Perhaps is trying something out of the norm. It seems it intentionally violates the rules of grammar. Yet by looking beyond skin deep . All the lines and words and stanza are all in complete harmony with one another.

Isn't space and galaxies and universe which are beyond our naked eyes reach are like that. The space doesn't have a beginning nor an end. No signs, no boundaries and no self impose limitations. Perhaps the author or persona is a Stargazer... Splendid write !

[Michelle N. H.]

Excuse me for my late response, but thank you for the several reviews of my poetry. It does mean a lot you cared to read so many of my words and leave behind your thoughts.

[NeiL ArandA]

It's my pleasure Michelle. I thought I have offended you when you close your account. It's good to see you back and around again. No string attach fellow poet. I read and review for pleasure. If I finds it interesting. I dive into it . Have a bless day.

[Michelle N. H.]

Not at all, Neil. You did not offend me with any of your words. On the contrary, they made me feel good. I only needed a break from the site. Have a lovely day also, thank you once again.

[NeiL ArandA]

:) .......................................................................................... You are welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

Beautiful imagery and wording. I find it enchanting...:)......................

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very nice writen . words can touch human soul. thank you.

[Rob Santana]

Beautifully written. Your words are serene and passionate. I love the image.

[Michelle N. H.]

I appreciate that. =)

[Kuandio]

There isn't anything negative I can say about this. I love the image, the song I kind of like, the font is great, the spacing, and of course, the poem itself. The first and last stanzas are my favorite. The way you write about the moon it seems you are talking about someone you love

[Michelle N. H.]

Thank you, Kuandio. =) Your words are appreciated by me, and yes, the one I love is within the lines.