Footprints in my Heart
A Poem by
Seepz
Footprints in my heart.. Friends, foes, sweethearts, Emotions unabated, feelings mixed, Sentiments that swept me off my feet.. Thoughts erased from the slates of my mind... Reveries i wish within me i could revive Prayers to the god unknown, Prayers that were answered and i smiled on, Love i know i never had in me, The tenderness in another's eyes that i see.. Footprints unlike impressions in the sand, unscathed by water and wind... Imprints nothing can negate.. Imprints so sheer, so innate, Impressions on my soul all bare, Memories of this lifetime spare.. Footprints in my heart, Friends,Foes,Sweethearts.
© 2010 Seepz
Reviews
once again, with simple words, nice style, u brought out ur message... i specially liked: footprints unlike impressions in the sand,
unscathed by water and wind... Imprints nothing can negate..
Imprints so sheer, so innate
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
A very good poem. The footprint of the heart leave us content or sad for leaving too many behind. I like the story in the words. Life allow us to follow the right road or leave us with the desire to do many things.
"Footprints unlike impressions in the sand,
unscathed by water and wind..."
A outstanding poem.
Coyote
Posted 14 Years Ago
A very good poem. The footprint of the heart leave us content or sad for leaving too many behind. I like the story in the words. Life allow us to follow the right road or leave us with the desire to do many things.
"Footprints unlike impressions in the sand,
unscathed by water and wind..."
A outstanding poem.
Coyote
1 of 4 people found this review constructive.
Ahh the good ol' one, always loved it sweetheart! :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
Ahh the good ol' one, always loved it sweetheart! :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I love the recurring imagery and messages, it surely helps you make your point. Good stuff..
Posted 14 Years Ago
I love the recurring imagery and messages, it surely helps you make your point. Good stuff..
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on September 15, 2010
Last Updated on September 15, 2010
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Seepz Dubai, United Arab Emirates
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