To Whom it May Concern

To Whom it May Concern

A Poem by Rivaxorus

In the deepest parts of my desire

From to whom it may concern
I leave this message,
For not only the brave it seems to concern
But, the darkness, in which we provoke on

I want you to hear this, my brother
For it isn't just a message
It is a warning, in which you may decide
To take, into your own account, of which to burden

This darkness may befalling us
Without a name
Without a sentence
But may I be darkness itself

Do you know, who I am?

© 2013 Rivaxorus

Author's Note

Does the darkness of a brothers heart speak to the one he can't hear?

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A clarified piece that reaks of stabbing emotion, well done, good read.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Flip flops! This was a great poem, I loved!

It's my favorite of yours so far! Wow!

Posted 6 Years Ago

Wow Outstanding poem. Great job.
~Your friend Res

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on April 16, 2013
Last Updated on April 16, 2013



Apple Valley, CA

Hello there my name is Abby Lawless, although I do prefer the nickname Rivaxorus. I'm Seventeen years old and live in California. I love writing, I'm hoping to make a career and live off of working wi.. more..

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