The beast I have tamed

The beast I have tamed

A Poem by Rivaxorus
"

The beast that is within us

"
I met a beast last night
It was crawling on my walls
Dog like in nature
But cat like in knowledge

It didn't speak
But it moved
With me
And against me

This beast I saw
It was terrifyingly docile
It's appearance was strained
But it wanted to be touched

I reached out
Touching it
The fur was soft
It was begging for help

That night I tamed the beast
And I see that beast every night
For that beast
Is the side of me I didn't want to see

© 2013 Rivaxorus


Author's Note

Rivaxorus
Have you tamed your beast?

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I think in your depiction you make your taming of the beast seem less beastly, than you denying that it is a part of yourself.


Posted 11 Years Ago


I think eventually whether we want to or not, whether by choice or force, we all have to tame our beasts. Very nice poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very nice, I thought you were going else where and Ha it's you. Lovely the stop and go flow is very impactual to me. Very nice piece. I am currently taming that very beast...
No easy task.
Chris

Posted 11 Years Ago


Really neat, I like it. Great job. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Haha, this made me laugh! I think at one point we have all tamed the best! LOL

Posted 11 Years Ago


Interesting to think that an inner beast would beg for help.
Good topic. Enjoyed.
~par

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ha - haven't we all tamed that beast! well done, good read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very interesting poem.
This is a wonderful way of describing your "inner beast" and what an awesome thing to say that you've tamed yours.
Good poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow i love this, good job. ^^
~Res

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Rivaxorus
Rivaxorus

Apple Valley, CA



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Hello there my name is Abby Lawless, although I do prefer the nickname Rivaxorus. I'm Seventeen years old and live in California. I love writing, I'm hoping to make a career and live off of working wi.. more..

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