Syndicated

Syndicated

A Poem by Trisha Clark
"

It's not a poem, so much as a thought with too many words. Another restore.

"

You're always smiling

in your photographs.

 

It's always you,

and her,

and jack,

and coke.

 

And there's a part of me

that understands

that this orgy

might be more fun

than reruns

on the couch

with me.

© 2008 Trisha Clark


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I liked this, wow, great write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


It's always you
and her
and Jack
and Coke.

-

orgy

f**k. you really are starting to quickly amaze me girl. you write short poems but really do they need to be one syllable longer to convey exactly what you mean and feel? not yet.



Posted 16 Years Ago


I really am liking your presentation ... and I disagree ... a thought can never have too many words ...

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you write as if you've been in your bones for 1,000 years

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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JlB
Damn that hurts,

no more feeling sorry for yourself. Go slay some man somewhere. I demand it.
Great poem.

I'm feeling the vibes.

JB

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


"this orgy might be more fun than reruns on the couch with me..."

this line did it for me... however, does this mean that you've been syndicated ?


Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

damn

damn damn damn

damn

love you.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:(

I liked it, you were quick and sad and made me picture you sitting on the couch all sadlike. :(

I checked it out cuz it hadn't been reviewed, and it's good sad poetry...Cosby's anyone?

You rock. :)

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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