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A Poem by $êlvån

This is for the world's most beautiful girl.pls come back..

These three days,
it was hard to sustain,
the truth that you left over,
with a say,
that there was nothing,
nothing between two united soul...

I may be mad,
i may be crazy,
but its not just me in all,
but it is you in me,
which drives me whole,
drifting me into,
those scary future,
where you are away,
away from where,
i can't just even dare...

Hoping that you would return,
clearing those concrete walls,
build by the fear of world,
build by the doubt of soul,
but i promise,
just hold my hands,
imposing yours on mine,
and i can fight with all,
to take you apart,
with a joy of life,
and something more than that..

Pls come.....will you?

© 2012 $êlvån

Author's Note

Its just a usual poem to relieve myself from my sadness...

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Those days away are scary and insecure because you never know what could happen in a moment, and you hope in that moment everything will change for the better. Let's hope she knows that coming back means coming back to that poetry that is you, I'm sure this is the idea you've inspired in this write. Nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


10 Years Ago

tanx 4 ur lovely review
wow! nice write
maybe if she could read this
she'll come back

Posted 10 Years Ago

I can feel the emotionis through out this write,
so very nicely written and expressed.

Posted 10 Years Ago

You express yourself amazingly in this one. Good job.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Well penned :)) keep it up

Posted 10 Years Ago

You expressed your feelings, sadness, and love very well. I hope that she is able to read this, however, you have probably said these things to her...However, I agree with Nautili, if it was meant to be, it will be. That may seem harsh right now, but time does heal and love will find you when the time is right...I promise.

Your poem is well penned, take care...keep writing :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

Very well execution of sadness in the line of poem!!keep writting!!

Posted 10 Years Ago

A wonderful write :))

Posted 10 Years Ago

This is wonderful, truly lovely write. Thank you.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Awesome poem! I loved the way your emotions were expressed. The first stanza gripped my attention. Keep writing!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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27 Reviews
Added on April 25, 2012
Last Updated on April 25, 2012
Tags: Love, come back, hands, hold, true love



delhi, Humanity, India

Different from the world but so similar like the other guys out here!! -A typical 18year boy with some dreams which are within my reach.. -i'm not lazy but i usually don't employ myself in anything .. more..


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