I Don't Know Erotica

So...can you teach me?

My lover...

I am a poet.

But I don't know erotica.

Will you please...

undress my ignorance

and write me an experience?

I am like a delicate paper,

consumed with the desire to be felt--

Just promise you'll be gentle?

Explore my exposed flesh with poetic touches

and discover a potential universe.

Wrap me inside the wonder of your words...

Until we explode--

in prose and poetry.

Yes...

Lose me in the pages of your passion...

Again and again.

Author's Note

*Blush* I'm not comfortable with free verse. And erotica.

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

This was beautiful, I felt. Simply because it was so intimate, in a writers way. The way you explain the desire to be touched and related it to a piece of paper. 'Lose me in the pages of your passion, again and again'. Such perfect flow and thought.

[Wordpress]

You should write free-verse all the time, it's much more fluid. You did an amazing job on this one.

[Blogger]

Too bad! I love it!

[MagicAl]

Great poem.. don't know why you're not so comfortable with something you're obviously a natural at! Good work!

[BlackHeart]

You did a great job for not being comfortable for it. So way to go on free verse.

[Nia Hope]

his is cute in a romantic kind of way I like it wonderful work :)

[Nia Hope]

*This not his

[MBUYISA]

wow nice poem
i like how you presented the idea behind the poem.
Thank you once again

[Oyindamola Shoola]

beautiful and well penned...

[Angel Criner]

Your words are sweet and sexy in it's simplicity.
The innocent type of sexy at that...
Lovely write.
♥

[Blue]

I like the innocent sexiness. It's more charming and sensual. ;) Thanks a lot for dropping by my profile, Ayah!

[Angel Criner]

Lol cute, anytime.

[Trace]

I think you did just fine.

If it has anything to do with erotica you might want to mark it as mature.

Youngsters and advertisers dont get it.

Enjoyed the blush.
Trace