THE WRONG TURN

THE WRONG TURN

A Poem by Senu Jayasinghe

Feel like I took the wrong turn
Somewhere along the road
I might have been wrong 
 All along, believing in a dream !...
 
It was all a lie, 
I've been fooling myself
This is the life, the reality
Which we have to accept
 Sooner or later...

Please ...
God give me strength
To make things right,
To steer my life back to reality,
Back to ' life'...

© 2015 Senu Jayasinghe


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Senu Jayasinghe
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Spoken from the heart of true experience, and a course changing one at that. Well penned and captured, you've caught an honest essence here that we can all relate powerfully to--- The great turning point in life.

What came before was never wasted, for it brought you here.

Thank you for leaking your heart~

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Senu Jayasinghe

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the review. ☺



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So persona thinks he has taken a wrong turn, meaning that things aren't the way s/he thought they would be. But s/he knows that it is not the end of the road. S/he can make a u-turn and start over. and the persona is trusting in God to help him/her to change the course of his/her life.

that's a wonderful piece. Down to earth

Posted 8 Years Ago


This poem bears a powerful message. Sometimes things go so bad in life that on one point, the feeling of realness is lost and the feeling of an illusion is gained but an illusion can be broken by the help of your self and others, for one can find strength in the kindness of others. I really like the way you stop such a powerful message in such a small poem but the greatness of a poem does not lie in its length, for I can see that your poem is great and that you lack no talent. Never stop writing and feed the world with your thoughts that must be shared.

Good job :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Senu Jayasinghe

8 Years Ago

Thnak you very much for the review... it is very encouraging. I'll do my best . :)
Nightfeather

8 Years Ago

No problem :)
Spoken from the heart of true experience, and a course changing one at that. Well penned and captured, you've caught an honest essence here that we can all relate powerfully to--- The great turning point in life.

What came before was never wasted, for it brought you here.

Thank you for leaking your heart~

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Senu Jayasinghe

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the review. ☺

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Added on August 17, 2015
Last Updated on August 22, 2015
Tags: Life, choices, regrets, lonelyness