Good vs Bad

my way of anylizing the balance of life's triumphs, struggles, and Pharis Buler days

Troubled times
lemons and limes
You sacrifice
you pay a price
you get out of your comfort zone
you think you're all alone
suddenly  you see a light
that motivates your internal fight
You get closer every day
This is what molds you like clay
You can now see the end
and you thank God, your friend
You look back and you're
you're not the person you once were.

Good times
warm sunshine
nothing learned
nothing earned
just a good day
but that's okay
relaxation
contemlation
no worries
no hurries
everything's going your way
there's nothing left to say.

The bad days are good 
they make life easily understood
Take the sweet with the sour
up until your final hour
and when you meet him face to face
thank him for his love and grace

 

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The idea behind this is that the bad days are better because when you get through them, you have more tolerance, patience, determination and other tools that you need to have in order to live your life. The end of a bad day is triumphant because you know you got through it. Sometimes what starts out as a bad day ends as a good day because something as simple as a compliment from your boss about your work, made you determined to work even harder.

 

God doesn't give us any problem we can't solve. He has more faith in us than we do in ourselves. He gives us these hard and difficult times so we can grow, mature, strengthen, and get wisom so that the next time something happens we're ready for it. In kindergarten we learned 1+1. Back then it was hard for us, but only because we were little; hence, little problems for the little children. Then as we grow up we graduate college get married, have kids, pay bills, etc. (adult problems for adults)

 

Author's Note

what do you think about my good day/bad day anylisis poem?

Reviews

[Serendipity]

I LOVE IT.

I am so glad you took my advice and put this into a poem.

I absolutely love how you analyzed how the bad and good make the days go round. The reality is you have to "get out of your comfort zone" to appreciate when "everything's going your way."

[Barbara Walker]

I think this is a great poem! I love the subject matter, the tone and flow and the rhyming scheme. Thanks for reminding me of what life is about to a large degree. I appreciate it very much! Barbara

[Vannah]

i love it...

[Jordan Harpter]

It is a beautiful work of art. The way your words weave through the poem is wonderful. You are very talented, and this poem is very powerful. The meaning and the words shine through.

[C.B.]

I love the meaning. I also love how much I agree. It's very true that 'what doesn't kill us only makes us stronger.' because there is nothing in this world we cannot get through. It usually ends up being, the bad days make you appreciate better days, because you realize that though everything's not amazing, nothing will ever be perfect, but nothing will ever be absolutely horrible. There are no extremes in that aspect. Everything lies in the middle because there will always be a better day, or there will always be a worse one.

This poem really touched me. Thank you for reccomending it. Very nice write, and I will definitely check out your other works,

[M_S_Lay]

I think its wonderful and inspirational