Good vs BadA Poem by Serenedymy way of anylizing the balance of life's triumphs, struggles, and Pharis Buler daysTroubled times
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what do you think about my good day/bad day anylisis poem?
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I LOVE IT.
I am so glad you took my advice and put this into a poem. I absolutely love how you analyzed how the bad and good make the days go round. The reality is you have to "get out of your comfort zone" to appreciate when "everything's going your way." Posted 16 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
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I think this is a great poem! I love the subject matter, the tone and flow and the rhyming scheme. Thanks for reminding me of what life is about to a large degree. I appreciate it very much! Barbara
Posted 16 Years Ago |
It is a beautiful work of art. The way your words weave through the poem is wonderful. You are very talented, and this poem is very powerful. The meaning and the words shine through.
Posted 16 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
I love the meaning. I also love how much I agree. It's very true that 'what doesn't kill us only makes us stronger.' because there is nothing in this world we cannot get through. It usually ends up being, the bad days make you appreciate better days, because you realize that though everything's not amazing, nothing will ever be perfect, but nothing will ever be absolutely horrible. There are no extremes in that aspect. Everything lies in the middle because there will always be a better day, or there will always be a worse one.
This poem really touched me. Thank you for reccomending it. Very nice write, and I will definitely check out your other works, Posted 16 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
I LOVE IT.
I am so glad you took my advice and put this into a poem. I absolutely love how you analyzed how the bad and good make the days go round. The reality is you have to "get out of your comfort zone" to appreciate when "everything's going your way." Posted 16 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
I think its wonderful and inspirational
Posted 16 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
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6 Reviews
Added on March 29, 2008
Last Updated on April 5, 2009
6 Reviews
Added on March 29, 2008
Last Updated on April 5, 2009
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I mostly write sayings and most of these sayings come directly from life experiance. Some come from questions I've had about something like comunication or life in general. I have a big heart. So big .. more..Writing
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