I Wish

I Wish

A Poem by Aurora Night

           I Wish...

 

        I wish upon a star that I had more time with you.

        I wish I had the chance to correct all the wrong I did to you.

        From the bottom of my heart I wish I never had to say good-bye.

 

        I wish on those lonely nights you'd still be there.

        I wish that you would get to see the day that pigs fly.

        I wish that you never had to die.

 

        From the bottom of my heart I wish

        Every day I have a new wish as I ask myself what if.

 

        You were there when I needed you.

        You were always by my dad's side.

        Constantly looking out for danger I wouldn't have expected you to die.

 

        Not in the way that you did.

        Not in a way of pain and sorrow.

        Not in any way at all.

 

        I always thought you would die on angel's wings.

        You would fly to the sky in joyous days.

        I wish you didn't have to die.

 

        Now I'm here alone.

        I have nothing left to fear.

        You are gone and no matter how hard it is to accept I can no longer wish.

        I'm sorry the doctor's needle was your only release from pain.

        I'm sorry I couldn't help you in any other way.

        You are my brother, my best friend, and most of all, my dog.

        I wish you didn't have to die so alone or in so much pain.

        I wish now that you are in a better place.

        I accept these days as best as I can dedicating the things I do to your life that was in my hands.

 

      May angel's sing and doggy heaven ring.

      May your spirit soar to new level's with no more horrors.

 

     I wish,

     I wish,

     I wish upon a star......

 

   

© 2010 Aurora Night


Author's Note

Aurora Night
This is for my dog. My best friend who I had to put down on October 20, 2010 at 11:00am.He died painfully and this has helped me release some of my emotions. Please tell me what you think. I hope you enjoy.

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Very touching. I felt quite a bit of emotion and can totally understand what you portray within this poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


its a beautiful and moving poem
i am glad that writing it has helped you with your emotions...
but i am sorry about the passing of your dog

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sorry for your loss, poignant writing, nicely written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


So sad to see your best friend pass away! I have some great memories from the dog we had when I was younger.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it I think this is very interesting! I'm sorry to hear that happened that's horrible!!! D: That's sad! I've lost a couple pets, but that's what memories are for :D This is beautiful!
And I love the ending!!!
I wish,
I wish,
I wish upon a star.......
This is beautiful and an awesome dedication!

Posted 13 Years Ago


omg =[ Sorry.
I lost my doggy too, she suffered from throat cancer n ended up daying, tomorrows about three years ago. I understand kind of how you feel =[
Beautiful poem, I felt the pain and love the theme of 'I wish'.
Great write and hopes you feel better =/

Posted 13 Years Ago



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I live in Colorado. I'm fifteen years old. I love to read, write, and play volleyball. i plan on becoming an author and publishing my books by the age of Twenty 22. I've already started on Two books,.. more..

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