Cloaks

Cloaks

A Poem by Sethnicity

Burying the past Wearing Cloaks of Innocence
Leaves a trail of Dirt
Leaves a trail of Dirt

© 2017 Sethnicity


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Typically I don't like a single haiku/senryu becuz it never feels "complete" . . . I want more. But you have definitely captured the essence of the short poetic forms -- this conveys a TON & it also conveys a complete & thought-provoking statement. I've always been the type of person to just leave, after some major breach in a friendship. Some things always leave a trail of dirt that plagues a friendship continually afterwards! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sethnicity

12 Months Ago

I spent two years writing haiku form daily and trust me it's really a task to write a decent haiku m.. read more



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Typically I don't like a single haiku/senryu becuz it never feels "complete" . . . I want more. But you have definitely captured the essence of the short poetic forms -- this conveys a TON & it also conveys a complete & thought-provoking statement. I've always been the type of person to just leave, after some major breach in a friendship. Some things always leave a trail of dirt that plagues a friendship continually afterwards! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sethnicity

12 Months Ago

I spent two years writing haiku form daily and trust me it's really a task to write a decent haiku m.. read more
You are right. Hiding true face from self. A foolish effort. Wise words shared my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sethnicity

4 Years Ago

Thanks you Coyote!
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.

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