Alone All Along

Based off of Evanesence's "My Immortal". If you haven't heard that song, check it out. Pretty rad.

In cold arms, not such a sweet embrace

Bound in rotten flesh, felt as though I'm losing a race

Wrapped in ropes, wondering why I feel so safe

Here once again, in head-to-toe lace

 

A whip draws blood, and it runs down my back

another scar added, it's story made of facts

Sweet crimson breath, blew chills through my bones

right as I thought you were here, I was then lost & alone.

Author's Note

Eh? Eh? Eh? Whattaya thiiink?????

Reviews

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Amazing! Wow this is so great! I can't wait to read more from you! Get writing girly =3

[Isabel Sarie]

Thanks Kenzie :3

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

My pleasure C:

[LOfCharlemagne]

Fascinating read for sure. Interesting use of describing things. I like how your descriptions fit the poem over all. Its a good poem.