Why Not Perfect?

Why Not Perfect?

A Poem by AchingAlexandra
"

Meh.

"
Jealous,
Of everything I see,
Happy couples,
Pleasant people,
Happy people...

Why Can't I be like them?
Why can't we just switch?
Why aren't they bothered,
by the s**t in life?

Btw, I like your brother,
not you,
I know you like me,
a lot,
but he just seems,
so amazing.

Jealous,
Of everything I see,
Happy couples,
Pleasant people,
Happy people.

Why can't they understand,
the pain I survive?
Go through,
The pain I do?

Btw, I like you,
I know we are both girls,
and that you are straight,
and have a boyfriend,
But you are just,
So Amazing.

Jealous,
Of everything I see,
Happy couples,
Pleasant people,
Happy people.

I wish,
just once,
My life was simple,
and everything turned out,
just how I wanted...
Perfect.

© 2011 AchingAlexandra


Author's Note

AchingAlexandra
This is kinda a lyric, kinda not.
And also kinda sucks o.0

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It's the best one I think...you've really touched on a heartbreaker. Yet, sometimes self is the best companion. Eventually, the tide breaks and surprises await behind every corner.

Great work in self-expression...reality fills every line.

Steel

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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i think this is really good Alex :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's hard to write about stuff like this, and get the full meaning across a single space.
You did it better than most people would.
Very nice.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Its Pretty Cool if you ask me, Alot of people feel that way but S**t happy couples aren't always happy They just choose not to dwell on the bullshit... Good Write

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


It's the best one I think...you've really touched on a heartbreaker. Yet, sometimes self is the best companion. Eventually, the tide breaks and surprises await behind every corner.

Great work in self-expression...reality fills every line.

Steel

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 12, 2011
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Tags: like., brother, Switch, them, pleasant, happy, jealous, love, girlfriend, boyfriend, Amazing

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AchingAlexandra
AchingAlexandra

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I'm a really nice person, but I have a lot of issues. I love writing, it helps ebb the regular pain I have. First name: Courtney Middle Name: Alexandra I'm purely myself. I don't change to fit.. more..

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