Simply be with you .

Simply be with you .

A Poem by AchingAlexandra

I just need to clear my mind .

I can feel it in my eyes again ,
or I guess I mean I don't feel it ,
because I know there's nothing in them ,
I feel the emptiness that's there .

I know you're broken ,
but I am too ,
and when you said 'friend',
my heart broke .

You said you like me ,
you said a lot ,
but this has the feeling ,
that you really don't .

I can't believe ,
that I'm sitting here crying ,
once again with no warmth,
from anywhere .

I don't know where to turn ,
how to smile ,
or what to do ,
all I know I really want ,
Is simply to be with you .

© 2012 AchingAlexandra

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Last stanza has a cool rhyme. This's a love-write of yer heart, you wrote it with the nice heart that beaten for someone special ... but i hate when someone as beautiful as you feel 'Sad' .. I hope he knows how lucky he's to be dating you and always to be with you for a life.

Nice work! Keep on!

Posted 10 Years Ago

nice write, reality bites, especially in love but only sometimes. if ur having a bad day--this shall pass. if ur having a good day--this too shall pass.
if this is personal, this too shall pass.....
this is life, well written words, that are the beginning of healing, recognizing the pain. Don't stop writing.....

Posted 12 Years Ago

The boy goes through the same
nightmare. Maybe he hurts worse,
we don`t know because there is
no scale to weigh hurt.
Just knw this, for every guy out there
who will hurt a girl, there are dozens
who would love to cherish you , to
hold you close , keep you warm and
comforted and fight to keep you happpy.
---- John

Posted 12 Years Ago

Everyone goes through this feeling in their lives. It seems like a popular feeling amoung girls. All I can say is, don't let your mind linger on a boy; it's not worth it. heartache will pass, hopefully soon.

Posted 12 Years Ago

heartachingly sad words, beautifully written

Posted 12 Years Ago

love the work great job

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on February 26, 2012
Last Updated on February 26, 2012




I'm a really nice person, but I have a lot of issues. I love writing, it helps ebb the regular pain I have. First name: Courtney Middle Name: Alexandra I'm purely myself. I don't change to fit.. more..


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