Measured Moments

Measured Moments

A Poem by Laura E. Dixon
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Written on the Eve of my mother's passing...

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Measured Moments           

                         July 22, 2006

Into nothing, a sea of gray,
No burning amber to light the way,
As seasons are lost, as years betray,
No more tommorows to seize the day,
 
As silence rests upon a will to pray,
No more seasons flutter; no more drops of rain,
A flagrant somber brings a delayed shame,
While, hope for a brighter tommorow withers away,
 
Rest, comes not easy, to those,
Lost inside a crumbling decay,
For, time is all, but, too uncertain,
As it measures each passing day.
 
 
 By: Laura Elizabeth Dixon
 
Written the evening of mothers death and spoken the day of her memorial

© 2012 Laura E. Dixon


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Laura E. Dixon
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Very nice, somber piece. It's short, but packs a lot of emotion in its words succinctly and beautifully. My only critique is that the rhyming pattern is not followed in the third stanza, which I find distracting. Still, good piece.

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Laura E. Dixon
Laura E. Dixon

Lufkin, TX



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Writing has taken the form of therapy, or self healing for me. Hope to be publishing my first book of poetry in the near future. more..

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