TWO HEARTS HAVE MET

TWO HEARTS HAVE MET

A Poem by Shabeeh Haider

                    Two hearts have met,

                      Two souls are paired,

                       With just a glance,

                       Secrets are shared.

 

                                                     With every beat,

                                                     The heart will tell,

                                                     The story that

                                                      We know so well.

                     

                         The seasons change,

                          But still we sing.

                          For in our hearts

                          It’s always spring.

© 2017 Shabeeh Haider


Author's Note

Shabeeh Haider
From my book : PAPERBOATS

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This is sugary sweet, the way love should be. Any woman would read and eat these words like candy. Well done!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the uplifting message full of hopeful ideas . . . especially soothing in these times when there's so much hurting in our world. Great cadence & rhyme & buoyant spirit expressed here (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Real sweet. Made my heart melt while I read. The start of it reminder me of a song my Aunt Denise you to sing to us.
"Two less lonely people in the world
And it's gonna be fine
Out of all the people in the world
I just can't believe you're mine"

I loved it. Good job.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Shabeeh Haider

3 Years Ago

Diane, thank you for taking the time to read and comment
Ah, this was lovely! Yes, the story of love is indeed well known. And, indeed, when you are in love 'It's always spring'. Gentle metre-beat, in red print, with pleasant rhymes... just right for the subject.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Shabeeh Haider

4 Years Ago

Thank you Aunt Astri for such kind words
Great Aunt Astri

4 Years Ago

Yu are most welcome.https://tse2.mm.bing.net/th?id=OIP.Ws5PLyFNwXgK7V6eoY7rMwEsDQ&w=282&h=196&c=7&ql.. read more
Very good. It is great to read a tightly constructed poem that is so well written. I particulary like the last two lines.
Regards,
Alan

Posted 4 Years Ago


Shabeeh Haider

4 Years Ago

Alan, thank you for your very kind words.
Beautifully stated Shabeeh.the heart beats in unison with nature and forever spring is what we all wish could be ours. Love it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Shabeeh Haider

4 Years Ago

Nemonomore, thank you for your kind words
Lovely write. always so positive and full of love. Great job

Posted 4 Years Ago


Shabeeh Haider

4 Years Ago

Thank you James
A beautiful poem.
Though quite simple, it has everything a good poem should have. The flow is rhythmical, the rhyme is unforced, the syntax is spot-on, and the visual presentation suits the piece perfectly. I love the message of the last stanza ... shows how your love remains consistent through any situation.
Thank you for sharing.

- William Liston

Posted 4 Years Ago


Shabeeh Haider

4 Years Ago

William thank you for your kind words. Love should remain consistent.
I wish it lasts long...A simole write touching hearts, I enjoyed..:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Shabeeh Haider

4 Years Ago

Thank you Surya, and nice to meet you
Long may it be spring for you both.
Nice to see romance in the air.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Shabeeh Haider

4 Years Ago

Thank you Paul for your kind words

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Writing poetry is my passion. I have been writing since I was 10 years of age. I love the poets of the Romantic Era and am very particular about rhyme, meter and balance. I have also written many Gha.. more..

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