THE SPLASHING OF THE OCEANS

THE SPLASHING OF THE OCEANS

A Poem by Shabeeh Haider

© 2017 Shabeeh Haider


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I think when the heart is broken. Every conceivable emotion known to man comes through.

Posted 3 Years Ago


A beautiful display of darkness, of truth. What's more, sadness makes such a lonely bedfellow. Some emotions are best kept hidden for fear of far more Everything!

Though tis such a sad poem,in a strange way it helps to share.. just a peep.

Posted 3 Years Ago


This is a very clever poem, both the writing and the picture. Neither detracts from the other (as often happens in other poems) and together they make a splendid, and harmonious, impact. The silence of the broken heart is perhaps heard in the roaring of the thunder and oceans! Wonderfully done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


I love the way your descriptions lead up to an indisputable idea -- we're always most alone as we endure heartbreak, huh? Nicely succinct & well-stated with good rhyme & rhythm (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


the sound of the heart breaking----you have to listen so closely....the pain is numbing and silent....and oh so lonely...

beautiful echo of pain here.

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Added on October 18, 2017
Last Updated on October 18, 2017
Tags: love, sorrow, poetry, shabeeh

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Shabeeh Haider
Shabeeh Haider

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Writing poetry is my passion. I have been writing since I was 10 years of age. I love the poets of the Romantic Era and am very particular about rhyme, meter and balance. I have also written many Gha.. more..

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