I Sit Here Thinking

I Sit Here Thinking

A Poem by Obscured by the Shadows
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Inspiration for this one was events of today and Poison's poem "What if I Were Gone Tomorrow?"

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I sit here thinking,

thinking about life.

What would happen,

if I were gone?

 

Would things have been different,

people more happy?

Or would it all be the same, 

just an empty space.

 

You walk into class,

there's one empty seat.

Who sit's there?

No one.

 

I sit here thinking,

thinking about life.

what would happen,

if I were gone?

 

Would people cry?

Or would they simply not care?

Another person gone,

nothing new here.

 

They think about me,

no reaction occurs.

This life was pointless,

I achieved nothing.

 

I sit here thinking, 

thinking about life.

What would happen,

if I killed them all?

 

© 2016 Obscured by the Shadows


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i like how relatable this is, well to me atleast. i just end up thinking and thinking about life and as i keep thinking my thoughts start going deeper and deeper. when this happens i just really feel numb like a void in my stomach that hurts emotionally. but the worst is when my mind is silent because at times a silent mind can be just as torterous as a mind being drowned in your own thoughts.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Obscured by the Shadows

4 Years Ago

I apologize for the affect, but I am also glad it caused such deep thinking; that is what I hope all.. read more



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i like how relatable this is, well to me atleast. i just end up thinking and thinking about life and as i keep thinking my thoughts start going deeper and deeper. when this happens i just really feel numb like a void in my stomach that hurts emotionally. but the worst is when my mind is silent because at times a silent mind can be just as torterous as a mind being drowned in your own thoughts.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Obscured by the Shadows

4 Years Ago

I apologize for the affect, but I am also glad it caused such deep thinking; that is what I hope all.. read more
I think everyone feels like this sometime in their life... that is why we continue to do the best we can till we are called home.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think you are a genius in creating these things, you really have the ability to provoke deep thoughts to the reader's mind....I was really thinking about the feelings of this poem for myself and so many thoughts came up to my mind....Hats off to you dear frnd....

Posted 4 Years Ago


Obscured by the Shadows

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I speak from the heart
Inject Positivity

4 Years Ago

I know that too....
Great flow, wonderful strain of thought.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It expressed what a lot of people in this day and age will be thinking about. I really loved it!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it, and I think that a lot of people all over the world feel the exact same way.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Obscured by the Shadows

4 Years Ago

People aren't all that different after all.
I love the thoughts... thoughts I have lived through many times. I wrote about it once on here... I think it's called fade away. Sometimes our mind gets the best of us and no matter how hard we try all our mind can zone in on is the thought of what is this place going to be like when I'm gone. Will I be forgotten? I enjoyed your thoughts :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Obscured by the Shadows

4 Years Ago

And I enjoy your feed back. It means a lot.
Good one! I like the way of posing questions

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very, very close to mine :p I like it. Very smooth flow along with a right to the point explanation of what you are trying to convey to the reader.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Obscured by the Shadows

4 Years Ago

Probably why it fell into my head, I can credit you! My bad XD XP
McBear

4 Years Ago

lol .
Obscured by the Shadows

4 Years Ago

Okay, finished XD All credited and stuff!

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