Tragic (A Haiku)

Tragic (A Haiku)

A Poem by Obscured by the Shadows

It is all so hard,
love is just a tragedy,
Let's all just give up.

© 2016 Obscured by the Shadows


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You know me being me, I always see what's the silver lining even in a tragedy. I think the whole haiku is like that ^^. Huh? Don't believe me? So it's so tragic you write about it, feel the pain and sorrow. But then again you felt pain you felt sorrow because you must have felt pleasure and joy as well. Yeah It's painful you feel like dying, but what if you got the second chance to experience it? Wouldn't you dive for it even if there's hesitation? Let's all just give up. Yeah Let's give up fooling ourselves that if things go bad then it's the end of the world, simply because it ain't ^^ Well that's just me interpreting. I could be totally wrong ^^' Thank you for sharing ^^

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Obscured by the Shadows

4 Years Ago

You're such an optimist, truly inspirational. I knew there was a reason I kept you as a friend, it i.. read more
Érenn

4 Years Ago

Well over the years I have come to realize that being negative all the time doesn't help (believe me.. read more
Obscured by the Shadows

4 Years Ago

True story.
I agree, this is very thought-provoking...
I sense a bit of sarcasm in the last line
{don't ever give up}...but that's probably me...
either way, excellent write.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Obscured by the Shadows

4 Years Ago

Very insightful, you have a very broad mind, I enjoy that.
ms. barrie

4 Years Ago

you're very welcome...and I thank you as well...
happy writings (:
absolutely true.... you know it provokes deep thoughts... it feels to my heart.... love is really a tragedy.... well done sis.... lovely haiku....

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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