Bleeding Heart

Bleeding Heart

A Poem by Wolf

I took all of the emotion that i was filling about my ex and utilized it in the making of this poem


Everything about you sickens me;


making me queezy every time i think of you.


Your love was a lie i cant beleave i trusted you;


now I lay here in this dark surcofficus.


Forever barried 6 feet under;


never to feel the warmth of anothers touch.


Your lies have forsaken me;


all emotions locked deep within my darkend soul.


And my bloody heart torn into millions of peaces;


shall never beat again.


My love that was a gift to you;


and the momment you took his hand;


You shatterd all possibilitys of happieness.




© 2010 Wolf

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I hope you enjoy yet another of my poems

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You express your emotions well. Loss of love is hard, but you will go on.

Posted 9 Years Ago

When the heart is bleeding. We have no desire to see someone we lost content. I like the strength in the poem. A very strong ending to a excellent poem. Thank you.

Posted 9 Years Ago

cool poem i love ir

Posted 9 Years Ago

Despite spelling errors, a good nasty poem. I can see the frustration you used to create it and I can picture an angel of death hovering over the one who killed her not knowing what horrible fate awaits him. Nice job Wolf.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on October 18, 2010
Last Updated on October 18, 2010



Franklin, NC

Hi im me and your you read my poetry wont you. more..

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