Heart Ardency

Heart Ardency

A Poem by Shamsuddin Mazed

         Heart Ardency

              You stay with behind
              Outside of the invisible wall
              Do hide-and-seek with deep of heart
              You caught by asleep heart

                  Heart stay with swing
                  And attach with dreadful Sea
                  Its lost every time
                  That's adjust with endless world

            Run with paceful air
            In very far with paradise
            As like glowing Star
            With clamour gather fair

                  I feel many expectation in heart
                 That's adjust with heart elegance
                  Lighting with Lamp of love
                  In your closed heart.

© 2012 Shamsuddin Mazed

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There is a lot of emotion in this poem which I feel is very powerful, it's really good

Posted 9 Years Ago

Emilie Louise

9 Years Ago

your welcome :D
Emilie Louise

9 Years Ago

just telling the truth :D
Shamsuddin Mazed

9 Years Ago

I think, everybody come with me alone....

Posted 9 Years Ago

just okay.. At first i realized many things...then,finally many romantic poem waiting for all...

Posted 9 Years Ago

you should post more of your art, it speaks to me without swerving all over the road
as some poets do....welcome to wc

Posted 9 Years Ago

Shamsuddin Mazed

9 Years Ago

I have thousands of poem.I didn't add my all writing......okay

9 Years Ago

good, looking forward to reading more
I think,If anybody write Something,feelings must need their.If,it's possible Your writing also attract everybody.okay

Posted 9 Years Ago

I lovez this! So much feeling and emotions. A great and beautiful poem.

Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

okay..Thank you.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on September 15, 2012
Last Updated on September 16, 2012


Shamsuddin Mazed
Shamsuddin Mazed

Dhaka, South, Bangladesh

I am Shamsuddin.I like poetry.............. more..


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