Unexpected Pain

Unexpected Pain

A Poem by Shamsuddin Mazed

Some reflection,Some emotion,
And some unexpected sorrow
That's attack in soft heart.
It's overcast with darkness!!!

© 2012 Shamsuddin Mazed


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very succint!nice!:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


very deep and filled with raw emotion, splendid example of how so much can be said with so little effort, given the right vessel. superb write....well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shamsuddin Mazed

8 Years Ago

okay.thanks.
A short and sweet poem filled with emotions. Really enjoyed reading it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shamsuddin Mazed

8 Years Ago

thanks.
A powerful short poem. You said a lot in so few words. When darkness overtake the heart. Hard to know happiness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Thank's to everyone........

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice poem. Salam .

Posted 9 Years Ago


Shamsuddin Mazed

9 Years Ago

okay..
Remnds me of this kid in my class. We were supposed to write poems about our names, so he wrote a shortened haiku that said,
The name Ryan
Sure is hard to write
A haiku about
LOL

Posted 9 Years Ago


Shamsuddin Mazed

9 Years Ago

hi,funny man....
almost a haiku...good thoughts...visually it needs an edit then it'll stare off the screen at folks

Posted 9 Years Ago


every now and then i read someone's poetry and it feels as if it were directed at me personally. i felt this write deeply. very solid and profoundly poignant

Posted 9 Years Ago


good
baki tuku koi?


Posted 9 Years Ago


Shamsuddin Mazed

9 Years Ago

You like pain.So, your needed many???

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Added on October 11, 2012
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Shamsuddin Mazed
Shamsuddin Mazed

Dhaka, South, Bangladesh



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