The Page

Lets tear off the page,

The scribbled one,

Covered with the colours,

Which we painted together.

Lets tear off the page, 

The one with the memories,

The one with the love,

The one with our drawings.

Lets tear off the page,

Which carried our words,

Because it's old now,

We got a new one to start.

Author's Note

Hey! thank you very much for reading, please let me know how's it!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Great logic in the below words.
"Lets tear off the page,
Which carried our words,
Because it's old now,
We got a new one to start."
Hard to forget things. But we must and begin again. Thank you Shasha for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Shasha]

So true, but we must and begin again.
Thank you!
:D

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Shasha.

[Ethan]

Great job! By the way, it's not necessary to put commas at the end of each line. Just put them where they're required. Beside that, this is awesome:)

[Shasha]

Oh, all right!
Thank you very much Ethan for your kind review!

[Gee]

Yep, plenty more pebbles on the old beach of love. As one door closes..
Nice Shasha

[Shasha]

Yes, thank you Gee, glad that you liked it!!!

[Phill Oz O'fee]

One day, one emotion, one life stanza at at time ... strong and poignant write - well done!

[Shasha]

Oh, thank you very much!!! You made my day!!!

[Chase Dylan]

Tear my off a piece of the emotions used to write this splendidly profound inspiration... Nicely penned...

[Shasha]

Oh, thank you very much Silente, I am glad to listen this from you!!! Thank you!!!

[Chase Dylan]

You are most welcome, Shasha...

[Paul Bell]

Out with the old. She's gone.
In with the new. Blond one.
Require big fridge magnet now.

[Shasha]

Ha! A big one! But that's not my experience, I stay away from it! It is one of my friends. Thank you!!!
:-)

[Carol Cashes]

Yaasss...tear off the page...of memories...and hang it on the fridge until the new is done. This was imaginative and compact, both hard to do but you did.

[Shasha]

Yeh! Thank you very, very much, I am pleased that you liked it! You are amazing!

[AwesomeSiya]

It's kinda sad... maybe u can add something about saving the torn pages??

[Shasha]

Maybe, But I think it's good this way.
Thank you very much Siya for reading and reviewing!

[AwesomeSiya]

It is definitely AWESOME!! Ur welcome!! :)

[Shasha]

Thank you, but maybe you are right, I can think of a better one, thank you for your suggestion!

[AwesomeSiya]

Happy to help!!

[Shasha]

Well,
:-)