For I am Complete

For I am Complete

A Poem by Kat

 Staring you in the eyes
 My knees suddenly go weak
 "Please, Just don't leave me"
 Is all that escapes my lips
 I drop to the floor
 My vision goes to a blur
 Screams fill the room
 Your hand holding mine
 as if saying "I Promise"
 My soul leaves my body
 Your heart torn apart
 Tears streaming down your eyes
 I'm sorry it had to end this way
 Though we will meet again
 I take one more look
 At the soul i have just killed
 Do i go?
 Do I stay?
 More bloody screams
 My focus snaps
 Only to see you by my side
 I smile
 He has killed you
 as he did to me
 Are hands together
 As we walk off
 I have my other half
 For now I am complete

© 2011 Kat


Author's Note

Kat
I honestly didn't know what this was about when i first started writing this and i still don't know does anyone have any ideas it just came to my head and i took the pen and scribbled it down before it left my mind.... so does anyone know because i don't

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this could be taken a couple of different ways the first way I interpreted it was a murder-suicide , this write has a nice flow to it and it is well penned.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very pretty~ you did a good job writing this, but I just want to point out in the fourth to last line you used 'are' instead of 'our'. Besides that it was a fun read and very beautifully written!

Posted 11 Years Ago


it sounds like two friends who are murdered by ones father. That or two lovers who are murdered but are glad to be together. Loved the poem, gets me thinking.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Interesting. Hard to follow, but I really like it. Sounds like a murder. Whatever that was, it was good.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I think it's about a murderer.... And ghosts? I guess that the individual you were writing about was waiting for his/her friend to die so they could both be dead together. Anyways, it was very "out of the blue" and I loved it very much. Thank you for sharing this piece with other readers and I

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aww soo sweet

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Kat
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