Tears?

Tears?

A Poem by Kat
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Its nights like these
fights like these

That I watch my pain seep out
that I scream and shout

That girl that used to save
that girl has changed..

Oh how badly I want to sin
but i manage to control myself within

I'm not able to cry
no matter how hard i try

That memory of that "used to be" you
can barley seem true

Although having you here is a must
you broke my trust

So i broke our friendship
and now i must watch myself trip

Into that deep dark depression
but I have this one confession

My pain will never be erased
for as long as your memory can be traced

© 2011 Kat


Author's Note

Kat
umm.. yeah.. sorry for not posting for almost half a year...

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This sounds kind of like me lately. I have felt excruciating pain and have been very broken. I wish I could erase the past but it has shaped me into whom I am today. Good language use and well done rhyming. The rhythm is very neat. Thank you for sharing this. :) ~DMX

Posted 10 Years Ago


This feels rather sad. I really hope you feel better! And I'm sorry I was so late in reviewing this. It's been hard to keep up with all the RRs I got. I am down to the last 30 right now.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I can realate to this so much, it brought tears to my eyes. I understand pain as deep as this, and it can trace deeper pain whenever you have to look back. It's hard not to look back at what could have been changed, and you realize you try to search out reasons why it happened, and that's not good, I learned. Because you blame yourself for something that didn't work out. People change themselves for theirself. They think they can be better, but it's not what they have to do. You don't have to be the best you can be, when you can't take it any farther. Thank you so much for writing this.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on December 21, 2011
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Kat
Kat

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About
I can't say much I only live for my friends I love Bring Me The Horizon Anything else? Just ask me... I'm not that interesting I honestly want to die more..

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Abandonment Abandonment

A Poem by Kat