Like the Wind on a Cool Summers Day

Like the Wind on a Cool Summers Day

A Poem by SheActsLikeSummer

Her voice is powerful...

Her voice is powerful,
Yet fragile,
Breaking when you least expect it,
Billowing when you least want it;
Wind on a cool summers day
Piercing through your soul,
Creeping up your spine,
Making it's way into you,
Delicately, Unseen;
Wind on a cool summers day
And when you try to fight it,
Cower indoors, afraid,
It finds away to get you,
Through an open window,
The slit below the door,
Or carried with you in a pocket
Prepared to strike,
As her voice is like the wind,
Like the wind on a cool summers day

© 2012 SheActsLikeSummer

Author's Note

The simile I based this off: Her voice is like the wind on a cool summers day.

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This is well written and full of beautiful imagery :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

its beautiful :) really nice xx i love imagery in poems x

Posted 10 Years Ago

Beautifully done. I'll be thinking of this when the wind next says hello.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on April 15, 2012
Last Updated on April 15, 2012
Tags: voice, simile, wind, cool, summer, day




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