Looking Back Mirror

Looking Back Mirror

A Poem by SheenLeigh

Lil’ bud of rose

 Inside’s bruise

 

Each petals that bloom

Is a Butterfly’s gloom

 

It’s thorns can’t bleed

Of the stems that greed

 

The roots that caged

Of the years that aged


The rose that waits

In the withers gate

 

 Picked by a hand

Of a rose once on land

 

Watered with tears

Survived for years

 

The rose once bud

Isn’t the  rose on the mud.

 

 

 

© 2015 SheenLeigh


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Great poem. Lot of sadness. But I felt the emotions in the writing and that is a trait of a good writer, whenever they are able to bring out of people the same emotions the writer is wanting to express. Awesome work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


SheenLeigh

9 Years Ago

Yes, I'm kinda emotional in writing this. Glad it mirrored my emotions. thank you very much.
Stephen

9 Years Ago

No problem
Beautiful, dirty sadness. Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SheenLeigh

9 Years Ago

thank you very much
realmwriter

9 Years Ago

You are very welcome.
I liked how you used the rose to create place and sadness. You took the reader into deep thoughts with a sad ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

20 is a good year. I hope you have time to travel, test life and have some fun. The best days of a l.. read more
SheenLeigh

9 Years Ago

will do . thank you, i should go . i have a class bye. thank you for your time
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

Good night.

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SheenLeigh
SheenLeigh

Philippines, Philippines



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