What Would I know?

If I were a Fly on the wall

Is with you where I’d want to be?

If I could follow you around

Would I Like what I see?

 

If I could listen to your every word

Would I like what you have to say

Not just when your with me 

But If I could listen ALWAYS?

 

If I were a fly on the wall

What would I report

To all my fellow Flys

About your private sports?

 

If I could see who visits

Would I know all their names

Or would find with each new person

That you’re playing games?

 

There is one thing I wonder

before we begin this show

If I was a Fly on the wall

What (about you) would I know?

Reviews

[Adam Jordan Turner]

Frances! i loove this one! very intriguing, it really makes me think about my own personal character! the things we do when we think no one else is looking. I enjoy it frances. Great write!

Love this part:

If I could listen to your every word

Would I like what you have to say

Not just when your with me

But If I could listen ALWAYS?

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Makes me wonder would I really want to be a fly on the wall lol... Good Job!

[Aries]

Wow...I love this...

It flows perfectly~

Awesome Write~