Fetish

Fetish

A Poem by Shelly Braen

Touching me in forbidden bravado,

Nailing me to him,

Hand by hand,

Tongue by tongue,

Foot by foot,

I sit in the thrown,

He speaks in fire,

Drip perfume,

Wax heart beats,

Smoke kisses,

Please, memorize me,

In a ball room masquerade,

Drinking butterflies,

Feasting on bolts,

This is war.

© 2011 Shelly Braen


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Such an amazing combination of imagery and feelings! At one point it feels like pain, fighting, a struggle, and at another time complete sensual, intoxicating lust! I felt flushed after reading this, it was so quick in apprehending, so hot in passion, so shocking in effect. "He speaks in fire, / Drip perfume, / Wax heart beats, / Smoke kisses, / Please, memorize me". Provocative wording, that...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Your collection of words reflects you and only you. This makes for great reading. Bravo.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I love it

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so odd, yet gorgeous. I enjoyed reading this :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow this is wonderful i like it big sis

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such an amazing combination of imagery and feelings! At one point it feels like pain, fighting, a struggle, and at another time complete sensual, intoxicating lust! I felt flushed after reading this, it was so quick in apprehending, so hot in passion, so shocking in effect. "He speaks in fire, / Drip perfume, / Wax heart beats, / Smoke kisses, / Please, memorize me". Provocative wording, that...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel like I've been clobbered! This is, well point blank. I love it!
I feel the piece more than understand it, if that makes any sense.

Excellent writng

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely. Very simple and easy to understand and bears a deep meaning, only a poet can imagine. Well done and I expect more of such writings.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Shelly Braen
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My pen name is Shelly Braen, I'm twenty five years old. I love Books, Writing, Art, Music, Playing the Piano, and Photography. Favorite Photographer: Robert Mapplethorpe Favorite Painter: Gustave .. more..

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