Letter To My Lover

A letter to my lover.

Dear Lover, 

Things have been so cold

Lonely nights in the bed

I miss your arms around me

Enticing me into bed

With your soft lips

Your hands running down my body

Touching the right areas

 

We get along during the day

While we work together

Side by side

Nobody knows about us

But lover where is the heat?

 

Needing your lips on my warm skin

Hands caressing each other’s bodies

Slowly exploring the world of pleasure.

 

Oh baby look at you in that suit

Working at your desk

Looking so dead sexy

Oh baby i want you so!

 

 

The heat in our affair is dying out

Why do we keep risking all of this?

Let’s save it tonight

 9 PM at Rosemary Hotel

Meet me there..

 

~Your lover 

Author's Note

I'll be writing another letter from the male later on.

Reviews

[St.Jimmy]

superb!
I loved this
it is a very bad feeling when we get apart from the person who we love and then we use to remind the moments we spent (good or bad) with our lover because somehow they help us to remind them. It is the only method by which we can stop the pain of getting apart

All in all a beautiful poem (or letter)
~Aaradhya

[Princy]

Seriously! Who could resist?
It drop dead sexy! ;-)

[Jibey]

Who could resist?

[Antonio Valentino]

Sweet and sensuality, what a magic combo.

Good stuff here!
Antonio

[Ferg]

i liked the more poetic female version of the letter......but each was true to form and conveyed the same intent.

[Scott A. Williams]

Cheers to this. I like pieces that don't abstract, that have the stones just to put it out there without flowery metaphors and similes. Despite a few lines that are just missteps for me ("Touching the right areas" was like a cold splash because it reminded me of a Timbaland/Justin Timberlake song) this works very well. I look forward to reading the counterpart, momentarily.

[alesuriko]

Very sensual. You can feel the longing and lust in the speaker's tone. It also has a nice flow although, I hope you don't mind but I think it might flow better if you chose a different word for "area" in "Touching the right areas" It just seemed to disrupt the natural flow. Very good poem though, nicely done!

[Taylor H.]

beautiful. I really enjoyed this and felt the love. Great job

[Coyote Poetry]

The letter is beautiful. A letter with desire and sweet emotion in every line. Those letter are precious when love and passion are the purpose. A outstanding letter.
Coyote

[Mukeshkumar Mafatlal Ra..]

Who says you don't know grammar? perfect expect a little one....nice poem dear keep revealing yourself .......simply let your heart relate...nice poem...