A Chapter by Shep






Hess and Morgan did everything in their power to make sure that they would rule for time and all eternity. They followed the timeline and killed all those that might cause a problem, as they searched for the 5 keys of destiny and the items they needed to open them. It is said it starts with the White Solon and the Dark Prince; however the clues are in the stars known as Morning Twilight.

The map itself has been lost as Morgan and Hess have been searching all the catacombs to find the exact pattern in the stars and the alignment of the planets in which both the Dark Prince and White Solon would be born. True… there had been many, but each had failed to meet the criteria and have failed by one missing more than the other, one was either too dark one was not dark enough the other was missing the same qualities which was not grown up in world wizardry and magic not just black magic like Morgan and Hess, but white magic known as natures magic and elemental magic yet for some reason each of the boys that said according to the oracles  and the tree of life said these certain boys could be the ones prophesied. If certain events happened to leave a riddle.


Two boys light, two boy’s dark. One travels through time and yet out of time. One is cared for the other isn’t. A mothers loves finds him and family makes him strong. Glory is found and glory is lost and regain when the two boys meet and stay as one yet remain apart. A quest is chosen and must be traveled here and far. And if not par-taken they will each take upon the shrouds of death for time and eternity. There will be no time no stars, no glory or salvation render to those that could have been saved. Only endless death to one and all waiting for a new a beginning that will never come unless those that come forth who stayed their hand of these two boys make amends and replants the seed.


Now Hess’s body is buried and soul trapped in the deepest part of the Cross Bone Gate Prison as he watched from faraway high up on a mountain top, knowing if he hadn’t escaped in time he to would be right where his master Hiss is. Yet it did leave Morgan with several problems. (1) Find the map of 5 lost keys and the items that hide them)  (2) Find a way to free his master (3) Find the White Solon and kill him or turn into the Dark Prince. Or do nothing. “Yeah right, that was never going to happen: One thing they both agreed up was the White Solon whichever the two boys were had to die and train the other one to become the new Dark Prince. It was far easier to teach one dark magic and give them the power to wheeled it.

© 2019 Shep

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Except for several small errors, this is quite good. Fantasy is a challenging genre that requires great imagination, and it looks to me like you're pretty proficient at it. An edit is needed. Here are some of the nits I saw--"salvation render(ed)..." "endless death too (to) one and all..." "...escaped in time he to would be..." Should be "he, too, should...

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Thank you for reading I will look it over when I get a chance.

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Thanks again i have re-edited.
Samuel Dickens

3 Months Ago

I skimmed it and think it looks better now.

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