A demonic romance

A bit anti-christian

Blood lusting hunters

skulking like rats

 

Cowering...

 

From their master

 

She is lillith

The outcast of Eden

The untold story

Of a gothic romance in paradise

 

Stricken down like a leper

She prevails in her bittersweet seductions

That snake of the garden

That hissing hell-hound

 

She will bring all to their knees

Crippling all good in the world

Draining our lifeforces

The apocalypse is nigh

 

Those lips so full

Yet behind them a forked tongue slithers

 

Her glistening eyes make hearts pound

Yet they harbour pure evil

 

She will bring all to their knees

In a demonic romance

Even the most...

Blood...

lusting...

hunters...

Reviews

[Short.Nerd]

Wonderful imagery! It was very dark. This was an outstanding write! Keep up the good work:)

[Princess3Morag]

I like this! It provokes very powerful images :)

[guiltyascharged]

Nice. I like the way it describes the girl as evil for once and not the dude.

[?]

Dark, dark, dark,
Very well written, like the flow.
Good descriptive
BEWARE!!!!!

[KAREN]

Captures evil and darkness! Well written!

[Madison A. Wright]

very well written...full of emotion and evil..very descriptive as well.. the line:

Those lips so full
Yet behind them a forked tongue slithers

made me cringe... very nice!

[Quinn Blackburn]

Dancing with destruction, like Death at the Masque... well crafted, excellent pacing and imagery for the topic. I personally don't see Lillith as demonic, but it certainly fits the Christian viewpoint on her! great writing!

[Randolf Ramos]

Deep meaning hidden in gothic like passion. well done

[Moebia]

Ooh, this was perfect. :O No corrections or improvements. ;)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this is so cool, great wording, awesome concept and amazing description... i love this