Walking the streets, with a mind of pain and virtue

She swept in like a wraith

Panicked whispers

Screaming virtuous knowledge

 

On the call of the rain

In such violence

In a river of blood

This is her wakening

 

Suffering frenzies of pain

She lingers

Aloft towers of ivory

 

Her scars

As sweet as the kisses she lays

 

Her eyes as deep as the ocean

Weeping agony

 

This soul struck witch

Walks alone

On a path of pain and virtue

 

Reviews

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melancholy and haunting.

[Calypso]

So descriptive. Well Done!

[Janna Nicole]

Very well written.
This one really struck me.

[Omar Fendri]

such a prevailing gloom and dejection lingering powerfully in every line creating such a quivering image of pain.
beautifully written

[☯]

Short and darkening. A sweet tale of evil. Nicely written :)

[An owl on the moon]

Vibrant, stunning contrasts of beauty and agony.. There is the wonder of the world, strung through the lines of fierce bloodshed tears. Powerful!

[Helpless]

not sure what to say about this one. the wording and the feelings are incredibly breathtaking. but i'm just not sure i am interpreting this one right....

[Misty Blue Eyes]

WOW.. mind blown..

[Fontane Wong]

An amazing masterpiece. Very imagery and descriptive, a soulful write. Feel pleasant while reading your strong and powerful words. Also, I adore the way you used the language. A really penned poem. Love it so much.

[Katub]

well done