Can you see me now?

Can you see me now?

A Poem by Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of Poetry
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Emotions erupted.

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I can see the trees

How they scream....

Tortures me.

 

I can feel the wind

How it howls....

Pains me.

 

Mans torture of nature is unjust and cruel,

A society of lies, intent on destruction,

A society of choking smoke and grim annihalation.

 

A culling of reality has ensued,

To embrace a technological essence of agony,

Why must we make her cry?

 

Mother nature was the first,

The higher powers are making sure,

That the executioners end it all.

© 2012 Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of Poetry


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I really like this. The wording's really strong, which emphasises the emotion of it brilliantly. Glad to see you're still writing (:

Posted 7 Years Ago


Awesome dude, very emotional and I don't understand most of the words xD you know Mr, im slightly stoopid xD loveyoulotsies xxx

Posted 7 Years Ago


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A delightful and freeing piece, perfect flow also.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I enjoyed this, felt the content was a little forced but I did enjoy this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This has so much truth... We need to quit the abuse on Mother Nature before she gives up on all of us...xo Great write..x

Posted 7 Years Ago


A powerful and sad poem for Nature. It is sad how we abuse the water, air and the earth. Man hunger is not common sense. We need Mother Nature more then she needs us. I like the direct and honest words in this poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of Poetry
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I am Sherb of Sherbs Dreaming tree, Come inside and see, My marvellous range of tea. Haha Im Sherb I love poetry, it was my life for wuite a while and i have been suffering an 18 month block .. more..

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