Fire In America!

Fire In America!

A Poem by Jasmine S. Edwards
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#Baltimore #Asa #FireontheMountain

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There is fire on the mountain
Only some seem to be on the rock
Oh there is fire on the mountain top
And no one is running

I wake up in the morning
Tell you what I see on my TV screen
I see the blood of an innocent child
And everybody's watching


Now I'm looking out my window
And what do I see
I see armies of a soldier men
Marching across the streets


What was taught to make you so blind
To your conscience and reason
Could it be “love” for your country
Or for the guns you use to kill it

There is fire on the mountain
Only some seem to be on the rock
Oh there is fire on the mountain top
And no one is defusing


One day the river will over flow
And there'll be nowhere for US to go
And we will burn, burn
Wishing we had put out the fire

 

There is fire on the mountain
Everyone should be on the rock
On there is fire on the mountain top

Since the founding of this country

© 2015 Jasmine S. Edwards


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Although the tone of your words is indignant, concerned, afraid. and more.. your voice is remarkably calm ... words set very precisely, various phrases repeated, intentionally so seems. Is the 'speaker' a controlled, sensitive and perceptive being Or, I wonder, rocking on her heels, ready to explode with fury? This is such an indictment if how things were and are not only in your country but globally. This should be read..

Posted 3 Years Ago


I love your poem . what touched me the most was the blood of the innocent child. That made me think of what picture is being portrayed for the younger generation

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on April 29, 2015
Last Updated on June 8, 2015
Tags: Black Lives Matter

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Jasmine S. Edwards
Jasmine S. Edwards

Rochester, NY



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College student who loves to write in my free time :) Always looking for inspiration and a good story to read. I write what comes to my mind or my takes on stories unfinished. My smart phone, a pen a.. more..

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