“Just Me”

“Just Me”

A Story by Shineheemi
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It is just me.

No one compared to them,
Not good as them.

Not so blessed as them.
Not so so and so as them.

But i’m just being me,

I’m letting myself go out of it’s own shell.
Letting this little girl (who’s quite age :) ) explore the small world.

As you do.

Which is just fine.

Being yourself,
Dreaming of becoming one’s another self.

Live yours while letting them live theirs.
Beautiful or a sorrowful life,

There’s nothing wrong with that.

You know..

Just Me.

🏃🏼‍♀️🏃🏼‍♀️🏃🏼‍♀️🏃🏼‍♀️🏃🏼‍♀️



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© 2019 Shineheemi


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As I mentioned in my last review of you, your word choices are a little basic & could be pumped up. But the important thing is that you have the most amazing SPIRIT that comes thru in your writing. This is what makes a reader stay completely absorbed in what you're saying. The best writing comes from self-honesty, which drips from your writing. In today's world of social media, people are constantly showing off their lives in photos of THINGS (even if they are miserable & unhappy) -- it looks like they have a great life. We ordinary people (I'm old & disabled) might look at that & feel small, diminished becuz we don't have "ALL THAT". I love your message for encouraging the little people, the ordinary people, to not be intimidated by the ones who show off. Let them show off, don't hate them. Just find our own secret to sharing what means alot to us. Being THIS honest is a great start. People want honesty in writing! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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This is beautiful!!! Keep it up! :)

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As I mentioned in my last review of you, your word choices are a little basic & could be pumped up. But the important thing is that you have the most amazing SPIRIT that comes thru in your writing. This is what makes a reader stay completely absorbed in what you're saying. The best writing comes from self-honesty, which drips from your writing. In today's world of social media, people are constantly showing off their lives in photos of THINGS (even if they are miserable & unhappy) -- it looks like they have a great life. We ordinary people (I'm old & disabled) might look at that & feel small, diminished becuz we don't have "ALL THAT". I love your message for encouraging the little people, the ordinary people, to not be intimidated by the ones who show off. Let them show off, don't hate them. Just find our own secret to sharing what means alot to us. Being THIS honest is a great start. People want honesty in writing! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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Nice ! It really is true that we all are our unique , individual selfs and the world should accept us as we are. I really liked the simplicity of your write-up which is easy to understand but at the same time wise enough to keep in mind.

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Shineheemi

4 Years Ago

I honestly have lots of thought on my mind, but it ended like that. I thank you for your special rev.. read more
Anjeline

4 Years Ago

You're welcome :)

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Added on November 14, 2019
Last Updated on November 17, 2019
Tags: Self, love, acceptance, change

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