I know...but he'd rather have her

I got goals gathering assets in accounts

line them up straight…keep the best aspirations in a row

far as being beautiful … assorted exotica obviously a point of recognition

somebody else may find it hard to fathom

such rare contours and eclectic designs…unassuming intelligence

comes with all that you see in this here vicinity

but he don’t feel straight arrows and even attitude…holding wrath

rejects the fever I get over the mere mention of life

it don’t matter if with my bare hands bust through ignorant walls

tear through structure and mortar to make happy apart of daily regiment

he don’t see I provoke positivity in the face of those who say we ain’t of too much concern

each day invite lessons of enlightenment …which disciple should I practice today

wash my face lathering with class and mercy

she is surface and physical and she… is consumed over

the wrong things

 

but  I’m doomed

he rather digs on her

Reviews

[Blue]

I like your style and choice of words. Thank you for the RRs. They are quite a break from the common themes I receive. Hope all is well in your life, poet.

[Shirlena]

Things are really good Arzel, I wish the same for you and thank you for appreciating my style. I love yours too by the way.

[Frieda P]

Some people are blind to the truth before their eyes, being solid and having your feet planted firmly on the ground can sometimes sit second fiddle to the one with her head and heels up in the clouds dancing to I want your sex....maybe we need to do both and learn how to do a wild foxy trot. ;-) Just saying. Adore your style...

[Shirlena]

Agreed but what's gonna happen if the house burns down and there's not a penny left to his name or he can't "pitch a tent anymore" will her sex matter then? It will for most women who will be on the next man smoking. I think there is too much emphasis on sexuality and my point is there are people who can love a man but won't keep him if he can't lay it straight. My slant in this poem is why does love take second place...people claim to won't it, some not able to live without it and as much as I appreciate the "horizonte'" it just seems to me it should be more than that...just some food for thought. People are going to do what they do :). Here's a good example: Robin Thicke is remixing "Lost Without You" bout now, O yes baby.

[Frieda P]

Ha pitch a tent...but I don't think it's superficial to want sex, they should both go hand in hand...yeah if his tent pitching skills are nil, you trust that your heart intent still lingers in the relationship, and buy plenty of batteries. haha

[Shirlena]

I agree, as you will notice the Shero of this poem has already" bent over backwards" eh, hence her funk over him relenting over "Ms. new booty" :).