falling from sphere

where you been...is it real

caught a line that isn’t a line on me

not a user of lines but will dig gold straw from truth

here’s my diamonds… treasure of frankness

did you come here from a stairway of nebula for salutations?

was a home beside me spied?

see you taking up corners and space…with continental presents

tell me it is authentic… I will saunter belated

we take the time to skip

other world’s together waist to hand…various geography featuring love

 

I hope so

maybe I am the dream had before leaving your dwelling place

still shots in the book of luminous ladies stopping at my letter

It would seem so…I’d be grateful

rendering obeisance to the MAN of the Son…you know of them the unprecedented

was there one who scurried a line unlike the line spoken of as this conversation began

let's cohabitate … join us at the hips

as a female subjected to every rap, every line…all the game

 

I’ll ask again

if you came not playing

 

yes I believe I should say it is so

 

Reviews

[WritersRankings]

This is your native voice, like an invitation to poetry and prophecy of love. Another keeper in my book.

"various geography featuring love"

It's playful, poetic, and totally relatable.

[Shirlena]

So I sound a little more grounded here huh Wuj lol... thank you.

[Blue]

"Did you come here from a stairway of nebula for salutations?"

-How did you know I did? Haha. Again, Shirlena. I just adore your wordplay!

[Shirlena]

Aww you're sweet Arzel thank you and I didn't know for sure...I guess good :)

[A. Amos]

This was deep and beautiful, you should keep writing I will come back to view more.

[Shirlena]

That is very sweet A. Amos and thank you cause I'll do the same for you ;)

[A. Amos]

You are most welcome, my friend as I can understand it's not easy to get the words together and you are good. So I wish you a great and wonderful future...

[Shirlena]

Thank you for that :)

[A. Amos]

You're welcome

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

This is incredibly cerebral. Is this about encountering someone out of the blue, and questioning their authenticity in regards to their intentions? Sorry, if I'm too lost in translation.

[Shirlena]

No, I love your interpretation thank you and yes, you hit the nail all about the head and shoulders ;).

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Ok, good to know... your pen conveys how much thought flows from your hand.

[Shirlena]

Very sweet of you to say...thanks poetic heroics

[Sami Khalil]

Interesting write...Thank you for sharing...:)...................

[Shirlena]

Well, I appreciate you for reading Sam. Thanks

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....................